662 - 20 Questions (2024 Edition)
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Hello and welcome. My name is John August. Oh my God. My name is Craig Mazin. And you're listening to episode 662 of Script Notes. It's a podcast about screenwriting and things that are interesting to screenwriters. Today on the show, we will strive to answer 20 different listener questions. Oh yeah. On everything from AI to page count, manager notes to emotional investment. Get the cocaine out. We're going to have to get some cocaine in us, John. Oh.

I don't think cocaine will really solve the issues here. The issue is that we have far too many listener questions. So every week, Drew gets a whole bunch of questions from listeners. They pile up in his mailbox. Sometimes we get a chance to answer them on the show. A lot of times we don't. Drew, how many listener emails do you get on a weekly basis? I probably get

Five to ten questions a day. Oh. Yeah. We got to get more. Do you know how you know that we don't do cocaine? I just said we have to get cocaine in us. Yeah. That's not what cocaine-ers say. Also, they don't call themselves cocaine-ers. You're making up new words. I'm just...

I'm clearly not a cocainer. Yeah, not a one. Well, we got to go crazy. We got to go crazy. So we've done this before, but we've never actually done it together because there was an episode back in 2022 where I did one with Megan where I went through 20 questions. Then you did one with Megan and I did 20 questions. Yours went on for like three hours. Because we love each other. But we'll do this together and we're going to crank through here. Then in our bonus segment for premium members, you and I are going to talk through the new D&D Players Handbook.

Okay. And that's why I have a whole stack of the old players' handbooks here. Oh my goodness, I'm looking at them. To compare and contrast. Glorious. Go back to the origins and updates to this fundamental text. Foundational, really. Yeah. For D&D players, it goes back all the way to 1978.

And we'll look at what's changed, what's not changed. Arnson and Gygax. Just the value of a player's handbook. It's just, I think back to sort of like how crucial of a document it was. Yeah, and how complicated and not child-friendly it was. Yeah. Hard to learn. Oh, for sure. It wasn't really designed by a teacher. Yeah, but I mean, in some ways it feels like

religious texts and that they're not designed to be easy to follow. It's complicated. You could spend your whole life studying them. What we have now, and we'll talk about this in the bonus segment, is the Bibles that they rewrite in American English, which are really weird because all the magic is gone. All the kind of heavy laden ye and thou is gone. The esoterica is reduced greatly. They're much more approachable.

Yeah, it says things like, Noah said, whoa. Noah did say, whoa. Which, yeah, is almost all the letters of his name. Yeah. All right, let's get into our questions because we have so many. Drew, start us off.

Undisclosed semifinalist writes, I just found out that I'm a semifinalist for the Austin Film Festival. If I were to attend, do you have any advice on how I can capitalize on this opportunity without annoying the professionals? All right, so when you say you're a semifinalist, so you entered into the sort of screenwriting competition for Austin Film Festival and...

a bunch of readers read your script and you made it up to semi-finalist. Semi-finalist will get you nothing in the real world, but it gives you an excuse to go to Austin Film Festival. So let's talk about what you might do there because we're going to be there next week, Craig. We are going to be there. And I think you're probably on the right track here without annoying the professionals. Yeah, don't annoy the professionals. They can't do anything for you. Even finalists are at risk of annoying the professionals only because, again, we can't do anything for you. But

what Austin is for is for you guys to do things for each other. You meet other people, you meet other writers, you have good conversations, you learn about how they're approaching things. And who knows, you might even find somebody that's interested in working on something with you. You might also bump into, when we say professionals, you know, we mean like the writers, right? We can't do anything for you, but there are managers there. There are producers there. Those are the people who, in theory, you might chat up at a bar and see if they're vaguely interested in what you have to do. Yeah.

So you are there with a semifinalist script. Hopefully, you are going to be able to talk about that thing. Be ready for the two-sentence description of your script, the one-minute longer description of it. Be ready to talk about other things. Be ready to send your script to somebody who might be curious to read it, like a manager or producer.

But mostly go to Austin to mingle with people, to go to a bunch of panels, go to panels that you're interested in, and look at it as that opportunity because it's not going to be the moment that changes everything in your life. There's no opportunity to walk in there, find somebody, go, I'm a semifinalist, and they go, great, here's a million dollars. That's not what's happening. By the way, just to be clear for people because John and I are going to Austin soon.

It's next week. Yeah. Or if you're listening to the podcast. This week, yeah. Approach us all the time. I mean, there's no problem. We love saying hello. And if you want pictures and all that stuff, we love doing that. But we just can't help you with your career. Not directly. Only indirectly through our words. That's the goal. Question two. An honor to be sort of nominated, writes, I worked as a coordinator on a show that recently won an Emmy.

Well, I'm very proud of the accomplishment for the showrunners, the team, and any small part of my role may have contributed to this win. My wife has been telling people that I won an Emmy. Ha ha ha!

I did not. And I am quick to clarify that my show won, not that I personally earned the award. While I'm sure to list on my resume that the production was Emmy winning, and I certainly hope to one day have my name on a statuette, I'm unsure how to navigate the conversations around this. Should I gracefully accept the well wishes and compliments, or should I continue to clarify with the thank you but not really dance? I'd love to hear your thoughts on how to handle this both personally and professionally. Now, we are actually going to throw this

to you, Drew, because you have this lived experience. Oh, I thought you were going to say because this is your question. Indeed. Your wife keeps telling people. So unlike me or Craig, you actually, we went through this. I've gone through this. So I worked on a show that won an Emmy. I've worked below the line for a long time. When your show, you worked on wins an Emmy, you get an honorary certificate.

that sort of recognizes your contribution to the show. It's got your name on it. It's got gold leaf. It's very efficient. Yeah, it's really nice. My family also likes to pretend that I won an Emmy. Yes. Even though I didn't. So my strategy tends to be to just bore people with the details of exactly what I just said.

And then maybe they'll stop the sort of saying that forward. Yeah, they just sort of nod and they're like, oh, okay. And then it honors sort of your loved one's excitement for you without undermining it, but still. I mean, in this case, I think it would be fair, Mr. or Mrs. to say to your wife, stop it.

That's the short answer. Tell you what, stop it. It's embarrassing because I didn't win. And now I have to explain it every time. I'm never going to be the person that just goes, that's right, I won an Emmy. And anybody that starts probing with questions, if I don't say any of this, is going to go, oh, you're a tool. Yeah.

You didn't win an Emmy. So, yeah, just tell your wife to cut it out. Tell your wife the show won. You work on a show that won an Emmy. Yeah. So in the show notes, we'll put a link to this photograph of Drew's certificate here, which is fantastic. So the 2015-2016 Primetime Emmy Awards honor Drew Marquardt, Operation Assistant, for contribution to an Emmy-winning program, outstanding short-form animated program. So everybody on Chernobyl got a certificate? Mm-hmm.

No one even told me. And what I think is impressive, Drew, is that you keep this with you all the time. You carry this with you all the time. This is my wallet. So you won an Emmy. I won an Emmy. Congratulations, Drew. Thank you so much. All right, questions three and four are related. Let's start with question three. Andrew writes...

Suppose that an artificially intelligent machine like data from Star Trek or some other AI emerged in the real world and decided to become a writer. Would it get into the WGA? Does the WGA have a policy regarding what happens if or when a non-human entity such as that becomes real? And should it? At what point should a policy about that exist?

All right, Data from Star Trek is a fantastic character. And in every way, Data is an independent, conscious, living being. And so therefore would be, in a world in which Data existed, Data could join the WGA. I feel that is entirely defensible. You'd have to change things, though, because currently, as I believe... A writer's human being. A writer's human being and any material generated by AI is not considered literary material under the NBA. So we would have to say, unless you're like...

Awesome. Indeed. Currently, no, is the answer. Currently, no. Andrew, no. So at some point, is it conceivable and likely, probably in our lifetime, that there will be beings that we would consider conscious who are not organic, I guess? And at that time, we'll have to adjust everything about society. And the tiniest thing we'll have to address is what we're doing about the WGA. Yeah.

Yeah, although I'm not sure that those beings will require things like money. But maybe they will. Maybe they will. But yes, currently, Andrew, we do have a policy in place. It is a result of our last contract, which we earned through canny negotiation followed by a long strike followed by some more canny negotiation. So at least for now, sorry, Data. Yeah. A related question from Alexander. Yeah.

Alexander writes, there was recently this New Yorker article by Ted Chiang. It brings up this idea of a very intricate and elaborate AI setup where the human can give it, let's say, a thousand inputs to prompt and fine tune a story idea. At this point, isn't the human still a writer?

Yeah, so Ted Chiang's article got a lot of traction. This was a month or two ago. And it makes some really good points. It also falls into some traps that I think people need to be aware of. When you say that generative AI is just autocomplete, it's reductionist in a way that is not helpful. And so Chiang does that a bit. But on the whole, I thought he made some really good points in his essay about sort of why, and we've talked about this recently, lots

Last episode, we talked about sort of the difficulty of doing what we do and that it's a thousand choices per word, per sentence, per project. And that's the art is sort of the struggle. And so without that effort, without that work, you're sort of not making art in the same way. I think what he is describing is

an artificially intelligent producer yeah so that's what producers do uh just at a much slower level right they're not going to give a writer a thousand inputs they're going to give a writer 10 inputs and then the writer will write something and then they will give that writer more input and that's what producers do or development executives

But no, you could do that a billion times. No, the human is not a writer. The human now, well, I guess in that case, the human would qualify perhaps as a producer. Yeah, it's entirely possible. You're giving such a detailed prompt that it's elaborating on so clearly on what things are that some story credit would actually be like if you were to sort of divvy up like had this little things at a certain point, you're writing enough stuff that it becomes clearly that that

You would have to write it down and you would have to catalog all of it. At that point, you sort of should just write the script. Yeah, you probably should. Worth people to read Chet Chang's article because I think it makes some nice points. There was a, two of the things I sort of pulled out of here is that

any writing that deserves your attention as a reader is the result of effort expended by the person who wrote it, which feels very true to me. And that many novelists have had the experience of being approached by somebody convinced they have a great idea for a novel in which they are willing to exchange for 50-50 split of the proceeds. Yes. Such a person inadvertently reveals that they think the formulating of sentences is a nuisance rather than a fundamental part of storytelling. I mean, you and I have gotten this. I mean, so many people are just like, I have this amazing idea. I just need somebody to write it. Mm-hmm.

You have nothing. You don't even have property. Go ahead, tell me your idea. Now it's my idea because it doesn't matter because you can't own an idea. F off. Yeah, stuff. The last thing I'll say about sort of this discussion that Chang brings up and just obviously people are thinking about when it comes to AI is

When AI is ingesting a bunch of material and being trained on that, is that more like a human being reading stuff or is that copying and plagiarizing? And it can feel like both. And so Chang makes the argument that like, well, if you just took five pages out of a book and said like, well, this is what I think about something. Well, that's clearly you're not doing any work. You're not actually processing that. But when an AI generates stuff that is clearly drawn from things,

to what degree is that plagiarism and to what degree is that what human beings do in terms of processing things and that's going to be an ongoing debate yeah how we are influenced by other things is the concept of homage the plagiarism is something that has been going on long before AI ever showed up indeed most Shakespeare's plays were drawn from earlier material most religions are drawn from earlier material funny that yeah question five this is sort of a bunch

We're bunching together a couple questions about this. Yeah, we had a lot of people write in about the stereophonic lawsuit. So let's do Jeremy's. Jeremy writes, I was interested to read this news story about the lawsuit filed by Fleetwood Mac engineer Ken Kalei and his co-author Stephen Stiefel claiming the Broadway play Stereophonic is plagiarized from their memoir on making of the Rumors album.

Does the transformation between memoir and ripped-from-the-headline-style fiction push this into a different category than if the play had been explicitly about Fleetwood Mac rather than a fictional Fleetwoodian band? Now, Craig, I haven't seen this play yet. I'm excited to see it. People love it. Yeah. This is a very interesting question. It'll be interesting to see what happens with this lawsuit. Jeremy puts his finger on the weird aspect of this lawsuit.

The closer you get to saying, oh, this actually is a dramatization of these people, the more protected you are. The problem is when you present something as fictional, there is that big paragraph at the end of the movie that says all characters within are fictional and any resemblance to any real people is coincidental. Well, unless it's not. Because what you can't do is say...

Take somebody's memoir, change some names, and then just adapt it because you have essentially circumvented the rules of copyright. They wrote it down. They own that, at least in its expression in fixed form. They don't own the facts, but they own the expression in fixed form. And if you are borrowing enough things, then you're infringing upon their copyright. That in and of itself is a difficult thing.

case to make. I think all these things are always an uphill battle. But if you were to say, I'm going to make a show called Rumors, and it's a dramatization of the Fleetwood Mac people, the only thing you got to do is not defame them. And defaming is a different deal. That would just be like, okay,

I'm just going to go write a bit where Stevie Nicks, you know, bites the head off a baby. Yeah, you're getting sued. But otherwise, you're kind of okay. Yeah. So this is a play written by David Ajmi, who was sued earlier over his play 3C, which was a parody of Three's Company. And I just revealed why he...

was able to do that because it was a parody. It was revealed to be a parody. This is not going to be protected by parody. The lawsuit, we'll link to the lawsuit here, it's interesting, it's claiming plagiarism, basically that it's an unauthorized adaptation of the copyrighted memoir by Ken Kalei entitled Making Rumors Inside Story of the Classic Fleetwood Mac Album. Of course, this is complicated because the actual play is not about plagiarism.

Fleetwood Mac. They're not saying it's about Fleetwood Mac. It's very Fleetwood Mac-ian. And the details that are in the lawsuit saying this is information that could have only come from his memoir to me feel a little bit tenuous. They are because if they're facts, you can't own them. So if the lawsuit here is

by Ken Kalei and Stephen, we're going to call him Stiefel, but I do like the idea of Stiefel. Yeah. If it's resting on, hey, we put a bunch of facts down of things that actually happened that nobody else knew about and then you made those facts happen in your show, they're facts, then the question is like, okay, so you acknowledge that you're using these facts but you're not using them under the names of these people and then you're like,

I think that's going to be tough. I honestly think it's going to be tough unless there's something defamatory towards them. Or there are things in the book that are said in certain ways, like people's lines of dialogue, for instance. So if they say, Lindsey Buckingham turned to me and said, X, Y, Z, da, da, da, da, da. And then in the show, some character named Jimmy Blingingham says, X, Y, Z, da, da, da. That's a problem. Yeah.

This week I saw the movie Saturday Night, directed by Jason Reitman, screenplay by Reitman and Bill Keenan. And I will be curious to learn sort of like...

where the boundaries were of what they could say or not say about people. Whose rights did they control or own? Probably, I mean, you don't need them, right? You just have to not defame people. And the history of Saturday Night Live is so extraordinarily well documented. The Tom Shales book is insanely, you know, it's just all it is, is interviews, first person interviews. It's a treasure chest if you're interested in that stuff.

So my guess is they were drowning in material that they could just point to. But I do know from having written something about real people and real events that there is a process you go through that is pretty rigorous to make sure that everything that you assert happened is documented somewhere, especially when you're talking about the behavior of people. Is it either reasonable inference or

Or is it within the boundaries of what their behavior was? Yeah. So you want to show John Belushi being a drugged out lunatic or show Bill Murray as a guy that punches people? Oh, yeah. Yeah, that happened for sure. You want to show Gilda Radner punching someone? Now we may have a problem. Also, you know...

and simplified by who's alive and who's not alive. Well, you know what? You're exactly right because Gilderander is dead and you cannot defame dead people in the United States. Hmm. Hmm.

Everywhere else you can. So you got to watch out for that. Can I ask a quick follow-up? Because I know we'll get it. So is it the frame of the recording booth that would theoretically be the problem? Because there was also like Daisy Jones and the Six was a show that was basically about Fleetwood Mac that didn't seem to have these legal problems. So is it specifically because they're taking... The lawsuit claims that this is from the engineer's point of view because we're looking at the stage from the engineer's point of view. I think that's crazy. I...

It's on stage. You don't own that. You don't own geography. A, you don't own it. B, who knows? I don't think it would have behooved Lindsey Buckingham or Stevie Nicks or Mick Fleetwood...

to sue over Daisy Jones and the Six. I think they would have looked like a-holes and it only helps them sell records, right? But you know who doesn't get helped when we sell a bunch of records? The engineer. Because he doesn't have royalties. You can imagine a scenario, like let's say that you wrote a play that was about the engineer for a Fleetwood Mac type band that used all the unique insights of just that engineer. And like the engineer was sort of the central character of the whole thing.

I think that would be a stronger lawsuit, but that's not, doesn't seem to be what we're facing here. Lawsuits. Lawsuits. Lawsuits. And as always, we beg, even though they won't listen to us, Deadline, Hollywood Reporter Variety.

Don't write about these lawsuits. Write about the results. And the results inevitably are a settlement. And so no results. Settlement or dismissal. Or dismissal, exactly. All right, question number six. Vance writes, I've always heard that script cover pages should have the basics and no drawings, graphics, maps, or cutesy stuff. On the three-page challenge, I've heard you not only accept but praise some illustrated artsy cover pages. Is this your personal leniency or is it now more accepted industry-wide?

I've always heard slash read. I'm going to guess from Reddit, other people who aren't professional writers, people in your writing group, school professors, websites from frickin' script consultants. I don't know what they're talking about. Look, I'm not in favor of it. I'm not against it. If it's cool, it's cool. If it's not, it's not. I mean, yeah, the default is title, name, contact information, title.

Maybe date. But if there's something cool that goes on the front, sure. Nobody cares. Nobody cares. Guess what? They're going to turn the title page. And if page one sucks, I don't care what was on the title page. And if page one is awesome, I don't care what was on the title page. I really don't.

My first produced script, Go, has a logo for Go rather than the word Go because Go is such an incredibly small word. The page just disappears. And so it was a larger thing. And John, how did you possibly get a career? You violated what? A fundamental tenet. Yeah. What all the gurus say. Yeah. Gurus. Gurus. We're going to Austin. You know what Austin has a lot of? Gurus. You got it. Tons of them. And you know what they're there for?

Yeah. Tons of it. Taking it from people who don't have it. I don't think they're there for money. I think they're there for like some sort of cred or some sort of like, you know, ego gratification. They're looking for clients. Yeah. They are looking. Talk about just a big savannah full of gazelles. And these cheetahs are out there. I don't know if cheetahs are about gazelles. Just slinking around, you know, saying, hey, hey.

You're this close. You're this close. You know what you just need to do? Give me $10,000. Yeah. You know, that's why I'm going to walk around Austin just be like, no gurus. Yeah. You're wearing your cheetah skin jacket. Yeah. Yeah.

awesome I gotta get one of those I saw Cheetah take down a gazelle it was like in person in person yeah on safari ew yeah when you're on safari like that's kind of what you're there for I just wish the honey badger guy were there and narrate all of it Cheetah ew ew look at him he's taking down that gazelle he don't care

Question seven. Kevin writes, as I work on my next project, I'm debating whether to closely involve the original creator of the source material or maintain some creative distance. In your experience, is it better to collaborate with the creator or can distance actually benefit the adaptation?

So I'm living this life right now. Yeah, I think it really depends on the project and the person. And so it's what's going to make for the best scenario for you as the person who actually has to do the adaptation. So Big Fish, I kept Daniel Wallace involved in the loop all the time.

I wasn't asking his opinion on things, but I was making sure that he was up to speed on things. There was another project, another big book adaptation, where shortly after we got it set up, it's clear like, oh no, this is going to be a bad situation. And I bailed on it because the creator was going to be way too involved. This is just not going to make happy for anybody. Yeah. I made The Last of Us with Neil Druckmann, who created the game. And...

He, I think, is probably exceptional in this regard. If you're going to bet, you're going to bet that the creator is going to be a problem. And they're going to be a problem because either they work in a different medium and don't quite understand the purpose of an adaptation or how adaptation should function sometimes, which requires turning away from the material, changing the material.

Doing things that some people would say like, oh, you made this part, quote unquote, better. Never. It's just about different media, right? But some creators don't understand that. And they just were like, here, just take book, make movie, don't change nothing. Yeah. And some creators want to do your job. They just haven't been allowed to. Yeah. That's the worst one, right? Where like I wanted to write this, you know, movie, but they wouldn't let me because I've never written anything or because I've written things I'm nuts. Yeah.

And that's never going to work. But there are creators who understand, who are smart and flexible and who are interested in making something that is a proper adaptation that feels different. And one of the things about

The Last of Us is because you're going from a video game to a show, the immediate need for adaptation is just there. Like, it's not like a book where you read it passively and then you can watch the movie. You're moving people around. We actually had a discussion yesterday about this image in our show of a building and a sign.

and how the sign wasn't really like entirely in view. And what I remember is in the game, it wasn't entirely in view either, unless you moved your stick on your controller and then you could see it. And I'm like, I think this is fine to not see the whole thing. It's just, we don't need to like move it so we can see it, you know? But these are the kinds of things that just come up all the time. But in passive to passive, creator could be a problem. So Kevin, I would be very careful if you're debating this,

If you're debating, maybe just go with, nah, do it on your own. Thinking back to my conversation with Daniel Wallace and with this other author, I basically had the same conversation with the two of them saying like, listen, I love your book and I'm so excited about it. I'm excited to get into this, but I want you to understand and to know that like a lot of things are necessarily going to change just because of the change of the medium. And I can't even know all the things that are going to change so far. So I will...

trust me that I'm going to protect your characters, protect the spirit of what you're trying to do, but it's going to be a different thing just because it's a different medium. And their response to that was what told me like, oh, one is going to be a good scenario and one is going to be a really bad scenario. Question eight.

Ian writes, I know your feelings about competitions, but what are your thoughts on writers' retreats? Is it just vacation under the guise of nurturing creativity, or is there value to the process of being with others, devoting time to the process and focusing on craft? How might your opinions differ for an emerging writer outside of industry contacts versus someone with ties to the industry?

I've never been on a writer's retreat. Craig, have you? Of course not. No. I've been on Sundance Labs, which is kind of like that, but you're not actually doing the work at the time there. That's super focused, too, and selective and...

No, but no, I've never done it. I actually don't know any of my writer friends who work, you know, the way we do who have done it. I have novelist friends who've done it. Yeah, maybe they need to just go somewhere to get away from the noise and stuff to write their novel because there's so much writing for a novel, you know, but no, I feel like there's another way to take money from people.

I would tell Ian that if you are curious about it, the opportunity cost isn't so much. And as long as the actual cost is not going to be... The money cost. The money cost could be. But if it's a... What do you think these things cost? I don't know. But if it's a one week, a two week scenario and you want to do it and you have the resources to do it and you think it might work for you, it's worth experimenting because every writer is different. And maybe this is a thing that will be truly helpful for you. Yeah.

Here's one in the Tuscan countryside. All right. That's just... Can we curse on this one? Sure, if you want to. That's a fucking vacation. I'm sorry. That's just a vacation that costs money. They won't tell you how much it costs. Oh, they do. Here they do. It costs... This one costs $3,500 to $4,500 just for the workshops. So people know. Yeah, that's a difference too. John and I will occasionally get invitations from these places to...

where they would fly us out and even pay us some stipend or something to be the person that does the work. We go to Austin. Austin doesn't pay us a goddamn thing. We fly ourselves there and we talk for free and then we go home. And just like we do this podcast for free. We're not saints or anything. It's just these things are businesses, right?

writers retreats to me are unless the i don't know the nunnery is doing it it just feels like another way for you to see feel like you're making progress or getting closer to the dream you just have to pay some money to do it nobody that i know who has succeeded in this came out of a writer's retreat or talks about a writer's retreat screenwriting is free

So there's a version of a retreat, which is more like what novelist friends have done, where they kind of recruit you in to do it, and then it's not like there's a...

or anything like that. Basically, you are free all day to write and to work and then you have your dinner together and then a conversation with the other writers who are up there. That feels like that could be really productive for certain people. I don't see that happening a lot with screenwriters, but it doesn't mean it couldn't happen. Also, you don't have to go anywhere to do that. You mean there are screenwriting groups that are free all around LA and they're being spit and you'll hit one.

And you want to go out to dinner with those people and chit-chat, great. And if you want to write all day, get on your laptop. Start, as John Gaten says, start clicking. Start those keys clicking.

Question nine. Anna writes, in your episode with Francesca Sloan, she said that she wrote short scripts to send in as samples for both Atlanta and Fargo. Atlanta itself has shorter episodes, but Fargo episodes run 45 to 60 minutes. Is it a good idea to send shorter samples to demonstrate tone and skill in a more digestible way for the people reading loads of other scripts, or is it a good idea to send shorter samples to demonstrate tone and skill in a more digestible way for the people reading loads of other scripts,

Or do people typically prefer reading a script the same length as their actual show so they can be sure you're capable of properly structuring a 45 to 60 minute script? So, Francesca Sloan came on to talk about Mr. and Mrs. Smith, a show that had a great, very specific tone. I think it's good to have some shorter sample you could also send, but I think a lot of showrunners will want to see something that is...

about the length of what their show is, just in the sense that you can structure that larger thing. A lot of times when I talk to folks who are staffing on shows, that showrunner

is really going for like, do they have a voice? Do they have a personality on the page? And that's more interesting. They're not reading the whole thing. They're basically reading the first 20 pages like this person feels like I want to meet them. Yeah, I don't think there would be any benefit to writing half of an hour long episode. Oh, no. So yes, I do think you want to deliver something that is the length to show that you have the ability to run

you know, the full length of the race. And yeah, if you are reading something that's really well structured and has great payoff at the ending and somebody understands how to pace and create rhythm and meter across those pages and,

make the dramatic circle and make the end feel like it was surprising but yet inevitable, all those wonderful things we're looking for, that's also incredibly valuable to see. If you have somebody that's just writing some glittering dialogue but can't seem to make a plot...

or land the ship, you go, okay, well, I might want this person for some glittering dialogue if you're running that kind of room, but now I know who they are, right? But I got to be honest, there are a lot of glittering dialogue people out there. There are very few people that you can reliably get a well-structured episode from.

So few that it's upsetting. Yeah. What might be a choice here is like, let's say you have the full length episode that shows how good you are at structuring and sort of telling a story over the course of 60 minutes, 60 pages. But then you have like a one-act play that can show a versatility and a different voice and a very specific kind of thing that you can do that no one else can do. That may be a good backup thing for you to have as well.

Yeah, the more breadth you can show, the more versatility, the better. But you at least want to be able to show the fundamental thing that would be required there. Don't worry about people having some sort of ADD and not wanting and seeing a 60-page script and going, oh, my God. They write 60 pages all the time. Because as we've established on the show, when we talk to showrunners, it's like they will throw your script across the room after three pages if they don't like it.

Correct. And if they do like it, they'll keep going and they may even just flip to the end. And they might read the first 10, the last 10. And if those are great, who cares? The middle is the middle. We'll figure it out. Ultimately, they're going to want to meet with you. Yeah, exactly. Believe me. If you read something good, then yes, you...

Gasp. Question 10. Andy writes, I'm pulling into the final stretch of completing a screenplay, which has taken me years to write. It's an adaptation of some private journals that were written in the mid-1700s. The author died in 1795. So naturally, I assume that the material was in the public domain, right?

Wrong. I just discovered that the owner of the manuscripts, a major university, who published them in the mid-20th century, holds the copyright to them until 2045 due to a quirk in the 1976 copyright law. I am a beginning screenwriter, and I would like to submit it to a few quality contests and some managers, but I don't want to act in bad faith. What can I do in this situation? All right, so there are two very different questions I see embedded in here. First is that, like,

This is a crazy scenario where something written in the 1700s is somehow still under copyright. I don't believe it, but that's a whole separate legal question. The second is, do I need to worry about this as a person who is showing this script around to managers and other people who can get me representation? The second one is much easier to say, show it. Listen, if there are problems down the road in actually producing it, fine. But you can show anything to a manager. You can get hired off of anything. So that's not a concern.

Yeah, I'm also suspicious of this. They may, unless this was a translation and they have the copyright to the translation or they just have the copyright to their published thing with the forward. What happens is sometimes they'll stick a forward on. Well, that makes it something now you can copyright that. But if there are private journals and you're literally going back to the private journals from the mid 1700s, I'm sorry. It doesn't matter who owns published whatever. There is no quirk in copyright that covers that.

That said, fine, talk to a lawyer, but you don't have to worry about that. Like John said, just, yeah, submit. You think the university is going to start going, no, they can't because you haven't even exploited it yet. You're just showing people something. It doesn't matter. And then if a company wants to buy it, believe me, they're going to tell their lawyers, you know, go over to that university and either slap them around or give them 10 grand and that's that. Yeah.

Yeah. So if you as a writer want to write a rom-com starring Superman and Spider-Man, you can do that. And absolutely fine. You don't control any of that stuff. You can never make that movie. But if it's great and funny and people love it, it can get you hired for other things. Yeah. You're just not allowed to make a dime off of it until you get permission from the copyright holders. Yeah. And when we say make a dime off, it doesn't mean that you can't get hired to do other stuff. That material cannot be produced. Right.

Yeah. Without their permission. Yeah. Question 11. Jason writes, Okay. Okay.

Currently, I'm using both OS and the action clarification. Overkill? Overkill. Yeah. Yeah. OS really means not there. Yeah. Right? So not voiceover, somewhere in the space. You'll also see off-camera. Off-camera, OC, OS, same thing. Yeah. Now, in this case, you would say, yes, we only see them from the waist down. That's fine. And if you feel like people are going to forget, you could write their name. If their name is Henry, Henry, waist down. You know, like in parentheses next to their name. But I think just...

OS or OC would not... I would actually do the OS. Really? I would have this description that we only see them from the waist down. And just because as people are reading through things quickly, sometimes they're not reading all the action lines. And so that OS or OC just tells them like, oh, there's something going on here. Maybe I should look back and see what's happening. The problem is it gets really annoying. Like, because you just... Yeah. That's why I'm thinking like, just...

make a custom waist down. Yeah. You know, maybe just over and over and over, but even that is going to get annoying. That's going to get annoying too. Yeah, I think you just bold it. I think you go, we only put it on its own line, bold it, make it a bigger font if you want, underline it. You could even do something like halfway through the scene just right. I just want to remind you, we're only seeing him from the waist down. Yeah.

Really what Craig and I are describing here is that you're going to feel that's something that's right in the context of the page and in the context of the scene. If it's like one line of dialogue versus if it's a whole exchange, it's going to feel different. Yeah, just don't worry so much, Jason, about like, oh, is there like something that's correct? That's a very kind of not in our business way of thinking. And we get it all the time. It's not your fault. It's this sort of pedantic thing that comes out of...

Reddit forums and schools and writers groups. You really can. Just every four lines of dialogue, remember, waist down only. He's still waist down. Yeah. Can't see his face. In all these cases, it's not that there's right or there's wrong. It's like, what's going to feel good in this moment? What's effective? And what do you want people to feel? And if you're nervous that they're going to forget something, remind them. But you don't have to remind them with this special way that people are going to go, well, technically, blah, blah. No, no. That's not how it works.

Question 12. Leo writes, I've always been able to write a screenplay, go through drafts, editing, feedback, and amends without a second thought, moving on to the next project and never looking back.

However, I've heard and seen so many people unable to relinquish control, and I'm starting to feel like maybe I'm not as attached or emotionally involved as I should be. I treat every script like a rep, like you would at the gym, but I'm starting to think that maybe I should be challenging myself to be more emotionally invested with the scripts. Any advice? Well, Leo, let's start with one possibility. You might be neurodiverse, be somebody that just doesn't feel things the way other people feel.

That doesn't mean you aren't feeling things. It's tempting sometimes to look around and go, oh, everyone is crying. I'm not crying. Something's wrong with me. No, maybe just you don't find this as sad. I do know quite a few people that are very successful who have nowhere near the level of angst that I do.

who write with a kind of freedom and less concern. Even like the way you and I write. So you'll do the vomit draft, which feels like it would be less emotionally disturbing. Let me correct that because I think it's a misunderstanding. You think I do a vomit draft and I don't. I write out of sequence, but no, I don't vomit draft it. Oh, you don't do a vomit draft. No, but I don't also do the vomit draft. Okay, so then somebody does a vomit draft and the whole point of that is they just write something without... They just write. No worries, let's just go get something down on the page and then I'm going to rewrite and that's where all the...

And I'm an angst writer, you know, every line. Like every day when I start, I go back over the day before stuff and I redo that. Everybody has their own. I mean, Scott Frank makes me look like I have no emotions, right? So everybody writes per them. This is part of what makes you you, Leo. I wouldn't worry so much about the way other people are experiencing this.

But I would listen if you say, hey, I should be challenging myself more emotionally. Also, maybe your scripts aren't emotional. Maybe they're just kind of what they are. Maybe they could be a little emotional or maybe this or that, but they don't have to be super sentimental. There are a lot of people that write that sort of thing. I think you should just be you.

So I read this as, I don't think he's so concerned about what is the emotional content within the scene. It's basically, what does he feel about the work that he's done? And how much of himself is wrapped up in these things? How much of his self-identity is wrapped up into this individual project? And there have been projects where I have felt that a lot, but I would say going over the course of my career, one of the things I'm sort of happy about is that when a project is just dead, it's like,

Oh, okay. I'm done. I'm able to just divorce myself and like, I don't think about that anymore. Yeah. And that's the useful skill. It is. I think the big lesson here, Leo, is you are as emotionally invested as you are. If you had to choose between getting super overwrought and caught up

Or being the way you are describing yourself. I'd go with the way you were describing yourself. You have a better chance of writing more, learning more. As they say, the first few scripts probably aren't going to be that good anyway. And this keeps you writing. Yeah. Nothing wrong with that. Agreed.

Question 13. Zach writes, I'm 28 and I've been a creative producer for five years on short films in Wisconsin and Minnesota. We want to move into features. However, my BA in theater means that I don't have much experience with the other fields an industry producer deals with. Raising money at the feature level, knowing how to schmooze, and making creative producing a job that pays so I can focus on my craft.

To learn those skills and still keep making films with my Midwest-based team, would it be best for me to move to a larger creative market to try to get a job and learn from the ground up?

Should I go to undergrad or grad school for producing or creative producing? Or do I just keep flying by the seat of my pants with my team and try to do it like Mike Cheslick and Rylan Tooze, who made two indie features in six years with Lake Michigan Monster and Hundreds of Beavers? All right, so I did not know either of those movies, so I looked them up and they do look... Hundreds of Beavers. I didn't see it, but the trailer was awesome. So...

It's great that you have a model for something you kind of want to do. And it sounds like that's kind of what you want to do is you want to be making their kind of stuff. And for that, maybe you don't need to get a lot more experience. You just need to sort of grow up your ability to make a short film into bigger things and bigger things because those are very specific niche kind of things. If you do want to like really learn how producing producing works, then

It wouldn't be the worst thing for you to apply to a program that does that and get you some experience with folks who are producing bigger stuff. And so something like the Stark program would be great, but it could also be overkill if your real goal is to move out to the Midwest and just make Midwestern films. Yeah, I think, Zach, this feels like you might want to come on out here. I just, in looking at what they've done, create a producer for five years on short films in Wisconsin and Minnesota.

Well, first of all, half the writers I know in Los Angeles are from Wisconsin and Minnesota. I don't know what it is about that place, that part of the world, but...

Very creative, very good writers come from there. The thing is, short films, as we've said many times already, a little bit of a dead-end street. Short films in the Midwest, a shorter dead-end street. It's a bit cul-de-sac-y. I think you might want to come to Los Angeles. You're 28, which is still young, but not young. It's a little late to start taking on massive debt to go to a graduate school that may or may not be the way to go.

If you had a choice between spending the, you know, what a start costs, 100 grand a year or something, you can spend $100,000 a year plus living expenses and all the rest of it. Or get a job that pays you 40 grand a year if you can. That's like a low rung thing where you're going to get demoted for a while from what you were doing to what you'd be out here. But you start working somewhere where things are getting made and things are happening and you start climbing a ladder. That is not a dead end street.

Yeah, I think what we're talking about is either you go to film school to learn creative producing from a structured program or you find a place that you work for a producer who's doing the job that you kind of want to do. You get paid to learn. Yeah, you get paid to learn. You get paid to learn or you get paid to learn. I pick the latter. Yeah, so you might want to actually a good first step for you might be go to some of these film festivals that are showing the kind of movies that you like to

to do and see if you can get an internship or a job working for one of those producers and really learn from them about the nuts and bolts of it because honestly making the things like Lake Michigan Monster or Hundreds of Beavers is a very specific skill set and figuring out how they do it is going to be the way to do it. Yes, and what the future holds for that is tricky. Like, you know, they're great indie bands but

It's a tough future. You get down the road and you start to go, oh my God, I love that band. What's going on? They're still out there touring. Honestly, Zach, if you could be an assistant to somebody doing the job that you're doing, which sounds crazy, right? I'm going to be the assistant to the person who does the thing I do, except that out here on this level, at this scale...

The people who do what you do are not doing what you do. They're doing something else. And you do need to learn and you do need to be exposed to it. And the whole point of being an assistant out here is not to be a typist in the steno pool. It's a ladder. The point about raising money, I think it's crucial because it's a very specific skill and it really depends on the kinds of movies you're trying to make. So if your goal is to make indie horror films, that's a very specific skill.

Pile of cash that is used to do those is a very specific business model. If it is these more esoteric straight indies, then something more like a Sundance or a slam dance kind of vibe, but maybe where you need to sort of focus your attention. And so be honest about what appeals to you. And I think you are. I mean, looking through their description there, it feels like they know what they want to do.

Question 14. 14. Rachel writes, I've spent the past year and a half writing and developing my first feature, which I also plan to direct. When my manager walked me through her latest round of notes, I had a gut feeling that she hadn't actually read the script. Oh, boy. Her notes were vague and kind of abstract, and it felt like I was the English teacher, and she was the student who only read the Spark notes and tried to BS her way through with ChatGPT, right? She ChatGPT'd some notes. Yeah.

I'm starting to question why she isn't more invested in a project she wanted me to write in the first place. So what do I do now? Do I make the changes just to keep her happy so she'll finally send it out? Or do I hold my ground and risk stalling everything? This is the third feature we've developed together. I've put my soul into these projects and I don't think I can handle another one falling apart. I'm honestly at the point where I might quit if this one doesn't work out.

I'm too old to keep doing the same song and dance expecting a different result. I feel trapped in this endless feedback loop waiting for months for each round of notes and even got the suggestion to shoot something on an iPhone in the meantime while she catches up. How do I move forward without compromising my vision for someone who isn't fully engaged? And is it too late to reconsider my rep situation? Craig, you have the advice here. What's the advice? Fire your manager.

Sometimes it's just that easy. It's just that simple. That was a whole lot of reasons to fire your manager, followed by the question, should I fire my manager? Yes. It seems like, Rachel, your manager has ticked all the boxes of being fire-worthy. Probably not actually writing the notes. I mean, I honestly do. The way she described it does feel like she just said, hey, ChatGP, so you fucking read the script and do some bad notes.

She takes months to respond. What is she doing in between there? And she won't send things out. Send it out. Just do it. If she doesn't want to send things out, it's because she has nobody to send them to. Shoot something on an iPhone while she catches up. What is she catching up with? I have no idea. Like legitimately, this just feels like a damaged fraud. And is it too late to reconsider my rep situation? Rachel, it is too late to reconsider your rep situation now.

if you have stage four cancer. Otherwise, no, it's not too late. Just, in fact, it's still not too late if you have stage four cancer. Fire them in the last breath that you have. Honestly, I think if you have stage four cancer, your odds of recovering from the cancer are higher than if this manager is suddenly stepping up and doing a great job. That's right.

It's a miracle. She sent my script. No. Your bone cancer is retreated. You're going to live another year. Rachel, for the love of God, I don't care. You say, I believe you mentioned that I'm too old for this. Yeah, yeah. I'm too old to keep doing the same song and dance. Correct. And I don't know how old you are, Rachel. If you're 22, you're too old for this. Yeah. If you're 82, you're too old for this. Fire your manager. Yes.

Question 15. Enrico writes, first of all, I'm Italian, and second of all, I'm poor. I've also wrote a screenplay. I really like it. Third of all, one small company bought the option for my screenplay so someone else likes it. The Italian market is a huge mess, so I want to try different options. Is there a path for a foreign screenplay in the American market? I don't know. And so this is where I think we need to throw to our listeners who might actually have some better insight here because we have a lot of international listeners. If

If you are an international listener or someone who works with international writers and can offer some advice to Enrico about sort of if you were an Italian screenwriter who's written something presumably in English, we don't know, and how you get...

that script read by English speaking audiences or British producers or American producers because I just don't really know. Did Enrico write this question in Italian and we translated it? No, it came in English. All right. So Enrico, first of all, just based on this, either your English is good or your translation program is good. Craig, I cleaned it up. You cleaned it up. Yeah. That's actually good to know. And we can leave that in, right? So, okay. So Enrico's English is not superb. So with that in mind, is there a market

Kind of, I've seen it. So I have gotten things that are from somewhat established filmmakers overseas who are trying to break into American television. And you can tell from the script that English is not their first language, but you're sort of doing the math of, I can look past that actually, to what's the story? What are the characters? Is this fascinating? Obviously, they're going to need

partner who does speak English who can help that aspect of it. But yeah, there is. I mean, there's that beautiful show about the young Italian girls growing up on HBO. I mean, there are absolutely avenues for

Foreign work, Netflix, I mean, puts it on. And Netflix is incredibly global. Yes, the Italian market is a huge mess. There's no question about that, Enrico. The Italian entertainment industry is a bit like Italian politics. Mamma mia, it's a mess. It really is. I was just in Italy for their film and TV conference. Did you note that it was a mess? I noticed it was a challenging time for the industry. It's chaos, but...

It's not impossible, Enrico. I think part of it may be finding representation who understands, hey, I'm not here just for the Italian market. How do we expand? You may want to start a little closer to home, for instance, the UK. And...

Kind of work your way to these. It's easier to work from UK to US than from, say, Italy to US. So this conference I was at this summer was all about sort of international collaborations between the Italian market and other European markets, which makes a lot of sense. Right. Now, the UK is unfortunately withdrawn from Europe, but... But they still do a lot of things with... Of course. Yeah. I mean, they were there. Like I said, it's closer. Yeah.

And they're more likely to look to that market than the U.S. is. For sure. Question 16. Tim writes, I signed with a reputable management company in Los Angeles. We've been working closely together. Fire them. I completed a screenplay that, after quite a lot of time refining it, we're now at a stage where a director's attached, as well as producers, who have financial backing for offers to talent.

It feels like a lot of cool stuff is happening, and I'm very thankful for that. It just feels like this is trotting along forever. I'm afraid of years passing by because of the slow-moving pace of it all with no meaningful progress being made.

So my question is, what else should I be doing? Is there more I could ask for my management to expedite the process or ensure my new script gets attention? Should I be asking for meetings with people around town to show both scripts to studios in an attempt to get writing assignments? I've already started on my next script and have a slate of another 10 I want to develop further to see if they have legs. So the actual writing is being done on my part. I just want to rally the troops and make sure I'm not missing anything, but also not come across ignorant or too pressing."

Great. So it sounds like your management company is doing something well, which is basically they've got this thing out there and started trying to get stuff in. But your concern that this is going to take forever is...

because everything just takes forever here because it does. And so during the summer, they'll say, oh, we'll come back to this in the fall. And the minute Labor Day happens, like, well, let's get back to it after the new year. That's just sort of how this town tends to kind of work. Until suddenly, within 24 hours, everything must get done. Yes. It is so slow and then so fast. Head-whipping, really. I mean...

I think the key word here is feel. Feels. You said it feels like this. But your management company in this meantime should absolutely be sending you out on a zillion meetings. And so it's good that you're starting on your next project and it's good that you have 10 things. Be ready to talk about those 10 things. Describe to your management company, these are the projects I'm most excited about going out and pitching with people. Let's find who these people are.

You need to manage your managers. And I'm managing your manager. They say like, ask them, so what's happening here? What can we be doing right now for me this week, next week? Let's make a plan for this. And it's okay to say, hey, can we go get drinks to just do a little planning for 2025? Yeah. And in that meeting, say,

this is how I am. Here's just me as a person. I kind of need this and this and this. It doesn't matter if it reflects reality or not. I just need to feel busy and to feel like stuff's going on. So you may want to overschedule me. You may want to send me to more places or...

hey guys, tell me honestly, am I bad in the room? If I'm bad in the room and that's why you're not sending me out there, would be great to know. Then there are other things that maybe I can do. Sometimes we just don't know why things aren't happening and we presume it's because of other problems and maybe people are saving us from ourselves. I don't know. So Tim, I love your antsiness, right? And I also appreciate that you understand it might just be annoying antsiness. Sometimes rather than saying,

Why aren't we doing things? Shouldn't we be doing this? Shouldn't we be doing this? Just say, here's how my brain works. Here's how I am. So therefore, what can we do? Yeah.

Something I did with my reps this year is whenever I'm sitting down with them, I have a one pager that talks through like, here are all the projects, here are where things are at, and here are what my priorities are. And I can just be really clear like, this is my number one priority. If this thing happens, everything else goes away. But here are the other sort of open loops here. So we can all sort of be on the same page about what it is we're trying to do, which is useful. Yeah, I mean, it would be nice if they did that. So I make the one pager.

Which is fine. It's fine. It's fine. They are who they are. Yeah. They all are. Question 17. Jenny writes, I'm a mid-level TV writer who sometimes hangs out and tries to answer questions for aspiring writers in a giant Facebook group. Whenever I post some well-known film or TV writer's script, aspiring writers are convinced that the formatting is wrong.

There are a thousand things that they've been told are verboten by so-called screenwriting gurus. Screenwriting what now? Gurus. What? Gurus. Uh-huh. But when I point out that no, it's not at all against the rules or even unusual for a screenwriter to say all caps a sound cue in a script. The pushback is always along two lines. A, well, he's a well-known writer so he can get away with it. Or B, well, that's a shooting script, not a spec script. You can't do that in a spec script.

It creates this perfectly shitty feedback loop where they convince themselves not to learn from some of the best writing in Hollywood. I've given up trying to help them. Maybe you can set them straight. I've said to them, we've done this for 650. Yeah, I think we're in our second decade of saying this. And you know what, Jenny? I'm going to give you some advice. Get out of the Facebook group. Yeah. They're beyond help. That's the deal. Like if that group is convinced that they can't do something,

Get out. Yeah. And if they're going to give... By the way, I just want you to know, Jenny, it's not just you. I get this. All the time. All the time. I'll go on, you know, what I did in Ask Manning thing on Reddit years ago and people do this and then I'm like, no, just do whatever you want. And they're like, well, you can get away with it. I...

Apparently always from the beginning, somehow weirdly I got away with it. Oh, that's a shooting script, not a spec script. Nobody knows the difference and nobody cares. This is the problem. It's just a barrel of crabs all pulling each other down. A lot of people are in these groups tripping.

to experience faux authority like they know makes them feel better because what they don't have is actual authority backed up by, you know, having a career at this like you do, Jenny. So you know what? Get out. Yeah. Get out and just let them sit there convincing each other that we see is toxic poison for a script. Yeah. I think your advice for her to get out is 100% accurate. I would also say that there's this possibility

blurry line between what is common practice versus what are the rules. And so understanding what common practice is, like what most people are doing on the page, is really useful. And you get that by reading a bunch of scripts. No one wrote the rules. There are no rules. There are no rules. There are no rules. And we have said this so many, so many, so many, so many times. It's the third chapter in the script notes book. It's the rules. There you go. There are no rules. And

It doesn't matter how many times you say, hey, guess what? If something's really good, no one cares. They don't believe you. They do not believe you. They think it's either a trap or it triggers their sense of insufficiency to such an extent that they need to defend. And I can't explain to somebody why they should or shouldn't feel sufficient. Right.

I don't know. I do know statistically, whoever it is, they're insufficient. That's just facts. Same way it is for professional sports or acting or anything. Just going by the statistics. If you make it, you are, you know, an anomaly. Yeah.

But Jenny, God bless you. Don't go there. No. Question 18. Joe writes, I'm writing this in one of the short windows of time that our newborn daughter allows in between feedings, diapers, and sleeping. Do you know of any reliable dictation to transcription apps for the iPhone to help a new dad get some creative thoughts down?

Using the iPhone Notes app, I tried dictation, but find that transcription stops after a few sentences. Outside of using the voice memo app and then transcribing later on, do you know of a reliable app that can do transcription to a better degree than the iPhone's internal features? I've read about a couple that lean heavily on AI, which only brings me ethical concerns, but might be the only current solutions. All right, so...

I use dictation software on the iPhone for journaling. So in day one, so rather than typing stuff in day one about what's happening, I will just dictate to it because I don't really care if it's not exactly right. I'm sort of getting it out and getting it down. So it's been most of my experience with dictation software.

A couple things to think about. Any transcription software is AI, so just get over your worry about it. That's just going to happen. I think voice memos on the iPhone now actually does transcriptions a lot better and runs longer. I think it automatically transcribes stuff. With the new Apple intelligence? Yeah, I don't think it's that. I think even creating the Apple intelligence can do that. Use whatever works for you. Just go for it. Yeah, I mean, this isn't an area where AI actually feels great because...

It's not trying to invent anything or pretending it's doing something new. It's just using all of its bits and bobs to move your voice into words. Yeah. It's just giving you what you do, not adding or subtracting. It's not editing you as it goes along. So, yeah, I mean, Google it. Yeah, Google it. OpenAI makes a product called Whisper that's actually very good at transcriptions for...

for stuff. Well, there's an answer. There's a way. So I've seen elaborate things where people will sort of take a voice memo and then they'll create a shortcut that then sends it through to Whisper and sends back a really good transcript. That's theoretically possible.

Every week there's going to be new stuff that does this. I would say just look for the simplest solution that gets the stuff done that you need to get done. Joe, if you're trying to dictate a whole script, that's going to be challenging. It's going to be tough. But if you're just dictating notes to yourself, great, go for it. I will say also, like Joe says, creative thoughts. Yeah. I have found, you know, if I'm on a walk or I'm somewhere and I don't have my keyboard with me and I have an exchange emerges in my head,

I'll just record it as a voice note. And then listening back is quite simple and often jogs your memory better than seeing it in a format in which it did not exist, nor did you type. So maybe just a voice note. Question 19. Gary writes, I've just rewritten a script from scratch on a project that was not very good and wasn't working in its last incarnation. None of the previous material was WGA.

At the end of it all, I'm getting written by credit, but the producer wants the story by credit to themselves for Byzantine reasons. I told them that I wrote the treatment for this version, so I'd share the credit. They insist that they've written a treatment in the past, I haven't seen it, that the previous draft was based on, and all of the basic broad strokes in my script were their idea, and this isn't WJ anyway.

I didn't put up a big fight as my hope is this won't win through the indie route and it will become a WGA script and I can let the guild drop the hammer then. But is this at all common? I couldn't recall seeing a story by credit that didn't include the written by author in it. I figured it would have to be a super specific scenario where a lot more detail than just the broad strokes were included in the treatment, like a scene by scene breakdown.

A lot of misassumptions. So much confusion. Well, first of all, Gary, it's extraordinarily common. In the WGA, you will see screenplays where it's a story by A, screenplay by B. Happens all the time.

And specifically, you wouldn't see that. You're not going to ever see a story by A, a screenplay by A. That would be written by, unless it was screenplayed by A and B. In the case of original screenplays, the story by credit is irreducible.

So, if somebody sells a spec and then somebody else comes in and rewrites it and does a lot of screenplay work but doesn't really change the basic essence of the plot, basic characters, etc., then it'll be story by A and screenplay by B. Now, in this situation, none of this is WGA. So, here's the bad news. You're asking all these questions...

And the answer is anything can happen. Totally. I mean, obviously this producer is a jerk. I mean, that's clear. Yeah. Right? Like, oh, did you write a treatment? Where is it? And no, you didn't. Now, you're hoping that this might end up WGA. I have bad news for you. If it does, you're not getting WGA credit because you didn't write this under a WGA deal. WGA credit is going to go to whoever else rewrites it under the WGA deal. Now, if that's you, good news.

Everything that came before would be source material credit along the lines of based on a screenplay buy. But the real then residualable WGA credit would be to you. And at that point, the producers completely screwed because he didn't write anything under a WGA contract. But currently, Wild West, buddy. Yeah.

And I will say that, independent of sort of where this ultimate goes, what names appear on the screenplay do kind of matter. And so if it says story by producer, screenplay by you...

It's going to be assumed that that is an accurate reflection of what really happened here. And maybe it's... Maybe just don't worry about it. It's not WGA. At this point, Gary, they could just say written by anyone. Yeah. You have no protection whatsoever. It's almost like maybe...

You shouldn't be writing stuff for non-union companies. Because guess what? This is what they do, right? Now, I understand you need money. Someone's paying you something. But you got to know when you walk into a lawless saloon,

You're going to get shot. Like, sorry, you took the money from an entity that has every ability. If they wanted to be union, put up the money, show that they have the ability to do it, follow the rules. They said no. And now you're like, what's happening? You're in the wrong saloon. Yeah, for sure.

We've done it. Question 20. Woo! Casey writes, for the past two years, I've been writing a screenplay for a TV series. I have a pretty unique situation in that I'm quite enjoying the writing, but I don't really want to be a full-time writer. I have no writing experience. I'm a middle-aged guy married with two young kids and a career that I'm proud of. The only reason I'm able to write what I'm writing is because the story is about an area in which I have immediate knowledge. I'm living it. And I'm passionate about the subject.

My goal is to write this one story, pass it off to someone who can get the show made, and then return to my current job. It's not about the money for me. My dream is just that the show would get made, although I do recognize that any show getting made is a long shot. If it takes 25 years, so be it. I was wondering if you had any advice for initial steps. I'm aware that agents and managers may not be excited about representing a one-trick pony.

All right, so let's think about Casey's goals here and why he's approaching this project. So he wants a series about the thing he does to exist in the world. And so he's chosen to often write a thing, which is great. You are free as a writer to write anything you want to do. God bless. And you're hopefully enjoying the screenplay format. But if you say you don't ever want to write anything else, then you're not really a screenwriter. You're a person who sort of created this one thing, which is sort of hopefully a template for a series. Yeah.

I think the best case scenario for what you're able to do here is you get something that's really pretty good, and then you're able to find a writer, showrunner, and show them this and be honest and say, like, I want someone else to make this series. I don't want to make this series at all. Will a reputable showrunner actually really want to do that? Unlikely, but it's not impossible.

In a weird way, the screenplay you're writing, the scripture you're writing, is less important than sort of like if you'd written this as a book about what it's really like to be a forensic pathologist. It's almost kind of like source material rather than a real script. Craig, what's your feeling on this? Yeah, you're not a writer, Casey. Yeah. You're telling us. You're writing, but when you say I don't really want to be a full-time writer, what that means is I don't want to write. Mm-hmm.

I don't want to be a writer. I'm not. And so unfortunately what you are doing is, is providing other people with a kit, like a model kit and saying here, build something out of this. And once it's a thing, then, you know, I get to see it. And you say, if it takes 25 years, so be it. It may take a million years. I mean, just like the, the thought that, oh, you know, it'll obviously it'll happen sometime between now and 25 years from now. It's,

It's not going to happen. It's not anything that anybody will be interested in because it's just a script from somebody that now is a burden upon the person who actually does have to write the show. That now they have to share created by credit with somebody who literally wrote 60 pages once. Yeah. I would strongly recommend, Casey, that instead of putting this in a screenplay format for a TV show, it sounds like you're writing a pilot. And if you've been writing it for two years, I'm also concerned. Yeah.

Write the novel. Yeah. Write the novel because that is its own thing, separate and apart. And then people love adapting novels to TV shows. And then it's fine, you know, Michael Crichton and all that. But yeah, writing a script when you're not a writer and you're not going to be a writer. And it's sort of like, you know what? I really like blowing babies up in people. I like it. I got a great idea for a baby. I mean, I don't want to be a dad. Yeah. But I got a great idea for a baby. Yeah.

And seeing as how you have two young kids, you know what I mean, Casey. It's like, it ain't about conceiving a child. It's about raising it. That's what we do as writers. It's the raising babies. Raising babies. Raising babies.

Craig, we did it. We made it through 20 questions. Let's do 20 more. Instead, let's do one cool thing. My one cool thing is Rachel Bloom's Death, Let Me Do My Special. It is her new special on Netflix. So this has been a long time coming. So if you watch it, I don't want to give too many spoilers for it. But essentially, in 2019, she started to come together with a comedy special. I had a plan for what this was going to be. The pandemic happened. She had a baby. Her longtime collaborator died of COVID. And...

The whole idea of like, how do I do a comedy special became fraught. So she spent years developing this thing. I've seen many incarnations of it. I saw it at Dynasty Typewriter where we do our live shows. I saw it at Largo and now I got to see the filmed version. It's terrific. She's so smart. Her songs are, of course, phenomenal. And it does some really interesting things with the form of what a comedy special should be. I got to get on this. I'm a bad friend. Yeah. I got to get on this. Now, question for you since you've seen so many versions of it.

Is it death, let me do my special? Or is it death, let me do my special? Is let allowed? Or is let, I'm asking permission from death? You're asking permission from death. Got it. So death is a character in the show. Let me do my special. Yeah. Got it. Yeah. Okay. Excellent. So it's on Netflix and everywhere worldwide right now.

Love Rachel. Yeah, she's the best. Congrats, Rachel. My one cool thing is the Warner Brothers lot. I love the Warner Brothers lot. So these days, lots are getting less and less lot-lottie. Paramount is an amazing lot, then no one's there. Now, maybe that'll change now that it's being sold. Paramount was the first lot I ever stepped foot on. And I was like, oh my God. And it was...

with cars and people. And Star Trek. Star Trek aliens in the commissary and bungalows full of geniuses. It's a ghost town now. The Fox lot was the second lot I ever stepped onto, which is also a fascinating beehive, which I suspect is less beehive-y. Oh, yeah. It's dead there. It's dead. The Warner Brothers lot is still alive. So we're doing our post-production in a building on the Warner Brothers lot and...

You walk around and you see production happening on the back lot and you see all these people coming out by where the commissary is and sitting outside at the tables and there's this like togetherness. There are the trams coming through, but they're not like the Universal. Like Universal is clearly turning themselves into a theme park with an office building built on top of a parking structure. Warner Brothers doesn't have that. There's no theme park.

And it just feels like, okay, there's still some old-fashioned Hollywood going on here. Disney is still a lot, but Disney is Disney. Yeah. Disney Live is actually fantastic. It is. But it's very Disney-ish. But I wonder if you get the Animaniacs running around all the time coming down for the little water tower. Because they have cocaine in them. Indeed. They're cocaine-ers. They're cocaine-ers. I miss it, and I wish we could get back to it, and it's not. Paramount is my great hope. Yeah. Yeah.

I mean, the Sony lot is also a lot, but it's like weird. The Sony is weird. It's divided a bit. It's two different sides. I said that Paramount was my first lot, but I think I actually had a class with Laura Ziskin on the Sony lot first. The Sony lot is...

really confusing to find your way around in. It's isolating and it's maze-like and they really have just like one quote-unquote street. Warner Brothers is just beautiful. It's gorgeous. And it's like sun-baked and it's got, it's so beautiful that their logo reflects all the, and it's got all those wonderful sound stages. Elon Musk can debut products there.

So anyway, my one cool thing is a good old-fashioned old-school Hollywood lot that is still functioning. And I'll bump into people I know and we'll have lunch and who knows, the ideas might occur. It's a nice place. I'm hoping that David Ellison can revitalize the Paramount lot. It's tremendous.

truly extraordinary. It really is fantastic. Yeah. And we have a request from a listener. They're one cool thing. Drew, help us out with this. Yeah, this is from our listener, Victoria. She writes, this is a personal one that's dear to my heart. Scarecrow video in Seattle is so important as an institution for the preservation of film, and it would be a tragedy to lose something like this.

They're trying to raise $1.8 million before the end of the year to prevent closure. It's an incredibly tiny sum of money given the amount of billionaire-owned corporation and arts endowments in Seattle, but it seems like no one wants to step up. Paul Allen probably would have if he was still alive, but, you know, there it is. I know you all care about the disappearance of film titles, something Scarecrow actively works against. It would be a loss to Seattle and the world if this collection was shut down.

And she links to the fundraising and an article from UW Magazine. Fantastic. Great. Yeah, video stores are this interesting place right now because while we don't need to go there to rent DVDs and videotapes, they are sometimes the last place to get these things. They've also become basically like social places where you can throw events. And so finding that balance feels crucial.

Yeah, I, listen, rooting for them. Always difficult to rely on a fundraiser to keep your business going. Yeah, because then it implies the model itself is not sustainable. It does feel like an end stage kind of, you know, we can extend your life by six months. So, you know, I'm hopeful. And who knows, maybe this would... Yeah, maybe the fundraiser is to get them to a new thing so they can make them sustainable. A new thing where they can, yeah. And sure, it would be great if, I mean, it's Seattle. So, hey, Bill Gates. Mm-hmm.

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